Harmony Central Forums
Announcement Announcement Module
Collapse

Announcement

Harmony Central has “soft launched” our new mobile experience this past week. While we have done extensive testing, we know that with a community as large as HC that there will be items that surface that will still need to be addressed. We are asking that you utilize the thread belowto report any challenges you may encounter. Here are the things we request you provide: A brief description of the issue, the device and operating system version you were using, the browser and version, screen resolution, and a screen shot of the display.
Thanks for your patience as we work towards the best experience we can provide to our community.

http://www.harmonycentral.com/forum/...ablet-feedback
See more
See less

Shattered Glass

Page Title Module
Move Remove Collapse









X
Conversation Detail Module
Collapse
  • Filter
  • Time
  • Show
Clear All
new posts

  • Shattered Glass

    Any suggestions or comments welcome, as usual.



    http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=12088507



    Shattered glass

    Broken this time

    Nothing but shattered glass



    You made me quiver with your kiss

    Then you made me invisible with a flick of your wrist

    Kisses blown to solid walls

    Just how far did you let me fall



    Ohh, you told me we would always last

    Ohh, your words have no meaning, they just shatter glass



    When I fell in the way of harm

    Did you wish for me to sleep forever, not return to your arms

    You told me to remember

    But it
    All things must pass...

  • #2
    Very nice, very listenable. The perfect Grace song.
    "I write from a different place. I do not even know what it is called, or if it has a name. It just comes and I sculpt it. But it is also a lot of hard work." —Van Morrison

    Comment


    • #3
      Lovely to listen to Grace (as always).



      I'm just a bit confused reading the lyric however. These are the parts referring to shattered glass :



      Shattered glass

      Broken this time

      Nothing but shattered glass



      Ohh, your words have no meaning, they just shatter glass



      Ohh, but in my mind, there
      'Music is your own experience, your thoughts, your wisdom. If you don't live it, it won't come out of your horn'.
      CHARLIE PARKER

      Comment


      • #4
        Hmm, yes, I did notice that actually, but I didn't think it was a problem.
        All things must pass...

        Comment


        • #5






          Quote Originally Posted by grace_slick
          View Post

          Hmm, yes, I did notice that actually, but I didn't think it was a problem.




          OK - you've noticed it - that's the main thing.
          'Music is your own experience, your thoughts, your wisdom. If you don't live it, it won't come out of your horn'.
          CHARLIE PARKER

          Comment


          • #6
            Pretty damn good, great vocal. Sounds very personal, a problem I have in my songwriting, getting that introspective, I'm more an observer in my writing.
            <div class="signaturecontainer"><font face="Franklin Gothic Medium"><font size="2"><font color="red">Guitars: Heritage H-150CM, Jackson USA SL-2H, Ibanez Jem 7V, Gibson SG, Fender Strat, Carvin ST-300, Yamaha AES620 <br />
            Amp: Carvin Legacy VL-100 half stack, Gibson L-5 Lab Series<br />
            Effects: Suhr Riot, Barber Dirty Bomb, Soundblox Classic Distortion, TC Elec Chorus, Boss DD-3, Dunlop EVH Wah, Gig-Fx MegaWah, Boss TU-2, Boss ME-50, Digitech GNX4</font></font></font></div>

            Comment


            • #7
              Lover the chorus "Open my heart" stuff. That's spectacular.



              The "Ooh, you told me" parts left me a little musically off. I think I wanted to hear the second chord in the progression as a major, not a minor. That sort of threw me off every time it passed by.
              http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dGxDwt26FZc
              http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/marshallsongs
              http://www.reverbnation.com/#!/marshallsongs

              Comment


              • #8
                Also you tenses are putting me off. "Just how far will you let me fall" will give it some urgency. As listeners, we want to be in the middle off the emotions; not after the fact.
                http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dGxDwt26FZc
                http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/marshallsongs
                http://www.reverbnation.com/#!/marshallsongs

                Comment


                • #9
                  Thanks guys!



                  Marshal, the tenses thing I actually changed to and from a few times, with the
                  All things must pass...

                  Comment


                  • leftyaxeman
                    leftyaxeman commented
                    Editing a comment

                    Grace Slick--- "Lefty, thanks for the comment! Yeah, when I first started writing songs NONE of them were even remotely personal. I found it embarrassing and too exposing to do that sort of thing, and didn


                • #10






                  Quote Originally Posted by grace_slick
                  View Post



                  And thanks LCK, if I neglected to say earlier!




                  You did, but I didn't mind.
                  "I write from a different place. I do not even know what it is called, or if it has a name. It just comes and I sculpt it. But it is also a lot of hard work." —Van Morrison

                  Comment


                  • #11

                    A couple of things lyrically 

                     If the words had no meaning they wouldn't be able to shatter glass.  The meaning might be empty and that very well could be why they shatter your glass.

                    I also couldn't help but think of some art I've seen made out of broken glass.  Beautiful stuff.  

                    I really like the way you turned the metaphor with the last line.

                    ...

                    Comment


                    • grace_slick
                      grace_slick commented
                      Editing a comment

                      Thank you!

                      This song seems really old to me now, even though I only did it a few weeks ago.



                  Working...
                  X