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U smile cover.

m26uk

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Definite improvements in the areas where I dinged you last time around... more dynamic range, I didn't notice any real straining, better on the performance/videography side of things, it looked like you were having a little fun with it.

 

You outright missed a few notes, but oh well. Other than that, I think you have room to go even softer at times. You projection is fine overall so I wouldn't expect you to have much trouble keeping the authority of the notes even as you go softer. Just an idea for something to work on.

 

Overall, very nice job! :)

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You have a great voice - quite a high range which would allow you to sing a bunch of stuff. Cool vid but you gotta work your other hand a bit - are you a lefty?. You lost the pitch a lot on the second "I smile" - the lower one. Your high stuff is pretty solid so maybe work a little on your lower stuff or the transition to it. These are really minor in the grand scheme of things - if you pulled this off live it would go over really well. Are you playing in a band now? I'd say you're ready to play live.

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Definite improvements in the areas where I dinged you last time around... more dynamic range, I didn't notice any real straining, better on the performance/videography side of things, it looked like you were having a little fun with it.


You outright missed a few notes, but oh well. Other than that, I think you have room to go even softer at times. You projection is fine overall so I wouldn't expect you to have much trouble keeping the authority of the notes even as you go softer. Just an idea for something to work on.


Overall, very nice job!
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hey man thanks, I did miss some notes, its quite hard song in a weird way.. I did knock it out quite quick.. thanks for the advice though will take it on board..:thu:

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You have a great voice - quite a high range which would allow you to sing a bunch of stuff. Cool vid but you gotta work your other hand a bit - are you a lefty?. You lost the pitch a lot on the second "I smile" - the lower one. Your high stuff is pretty solid so maybe work a little on your lower stuff or the transition to it. These are really minor in the grand scheme of things - if you pulled this off live it would go over really well. Are you playing in a band now? I'd say you're ready to play live.

 

thanks, I'm actually a righty!! I see what you mean though! lol not in a band but hoping to sing at a wedding soon, thanks again! :thu:

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