I have troubles.....

The only rhyme pattern i seem to be able to use at all is

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Y

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Kinda pisses me off, but hey. What do you guys think of this.

SELF ON A SHELF

intro

one cannot see through tear stained eyes

yet'cha cannot live in this bitter life

run and hide to the forbidden tomb

where your tears run cold in forgotten rooms

chorus

place yourself upon your shelf

and sit there through the night

run away, find a place to stay

where the cold will take your life

then lay on the grass and stare at the stars

and beg for the sun to rise

feel the blood run down your face

and realize the truth in the lies

v1

take away everyting you own

make nothing of everything you know

from the blue of the sky

to the bullets wizzing by

for the only things you know are lies

[the confusion lies within]

chorus

place yourself upon your shelf

and sit there through the night

run away, find a place to stay

where the cold will take your life

then lay on the grass and stare at the stars

and beg for the sun to rise

feel the blood run down your face

and realize the truth in the lies

v2

yeah, so here i sit, upon my shelf

watching you destroy yourself

the Silhouette of a dark blue moon

the loss of life from a bitter swoon

never find the truth in their eyes

let the feelings fall from your eyes

then take the pain and dememorize

the lies

(I have music to it also.)