begging for some input on my songs.

Im 16yrs old and have my own acoustic project. These are the lyrics to one of my songs. If you your interested in hearing them, I have 2 up at my website: www.autumnsfall.cjb.net Any constructive critism or comments are greatly appreciated.

If Only...

My sense of loss grows deeper, and i know

she's already gone. Her eyes are telling me

nothing. as it seems she doesnt feel a thing

when I...

say what i feel, when its to late, she's

already his. when i say it's more than i can

bear and it is.

I will take from this and learn, its to late

i know i've lost her again, and stand still

and watch it all unfold it's so unfair...

Just wait right there, i will try my best,

to not let this fall through. Again.. she

doesnt care, theres no more trying.

Because there's no more trying, no more trying

tonight. theres no use in saying anything to her.

and even if i gave it all I had, it still

wouldnt make a difference to her. It'd still end

up the same way. Im done.

I really like your lyrics. The songs have a Green Day (time of your life) kind of feel. The two songs on your site have a very similar sound, very similar pacing. I'd like to hear more...I'm curious about whether you have any at a different pace---I think you need some variety.

good point your right the pace is very similar, i have two more, one of them much slower comparing to these, I'll try and get em up soon.