Members el_duderino676 Posted May 22, 2005 Members Share Posted May 22, 2005 I can't write worth a crap, but tell me what you think of this. I look into the stars at nightI try to find my wayThis method seems impossibleSince my sight is blinded by cloudsI wander on in the darknessonly to find I've been walking in circlesI need a light to shine on meas I try to find something I know Darkness in front of meDarkness behindIf I don't find my wayI'll lose my mind My mind is racingas I scamper along the lonely roadNobody seems to see meuntil they almost knock me overMy heart is pounds in my chestwhen I think I see the waybut then I realizethat I was asleep at the wheel Darkness in front of meDarkness behindIf I don't find my wayI'll lose my mind I feel like I can't go oneverything seems to fall on meDrowning in blackI know I've lostyet I can't accept my fatebecause my mind won't cease to searchfor the only way outof the smothering nightI tryI failI fill with sorrowI am no more Darkness in front of meDarkness behindIf I don't find my wayI'll lose my mind Darkness in front of meDarkness behindIf I don't find my wayI'll lose my mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bruto Posted May 23, 2005 Members Share Posted May 23, 2005 Nice lyrics. With a dark tone as that, it would sound good with a raspy downbeat folk / blues singer like Tracy Chapman. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members el_duderino676 Posted May 23, 2005 Author Members Share Posted May 23, 2005 Originally posted by bruto Nice lyrics. With a dark tone as that, it would sound good with a raspy downbeat folk / blues singer like Tracy Chapman. I was actually thinking of taking it in a similar direction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members virtuohno Posted May 24, 2005 Members Share Posted May 24, 2005 pretty cool , IF, you lose the word 'scamper' ..... other suggestions...... wander drift race stumble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members el_duderino676 Posted May 24, 2005 Author Members Share Posted May 24, 2005 Originally posted by virtuohno pretty cool , IF, you lose the word 'scamper' ..... other suggestions...... wander drift race stumble Yeah, scamper isn't the best choice, is it. I think that stumble would fit nicely with the tone of the song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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