Foolish

ya so i wrote this really quick when i was pissed of think of it will some like hard fast hardcore type music

so i drive in this {censored}ing car for hours

no direction, no sense of time or distance

silence may be golden but i want to scream in you face

so youd rather be abused, i take it

these feelings were new to both of us

i just figured them out sooner

but my emotions are depleated

dont wanna convince you

just want it to be right

a 20 year search was over in mere minutes

should i search another 20 years

ill treat you like {censored}

would that make you ok

there only so many way to say the same thing

dont wanna convince you

just want it to be right

yeah and i gave you everything

and now i want it back

your poor excues make fools out of both of us

nights in allys make us fools together

but you know what

go and be pretend with someone who is making a fool of you

Some pretty nasty stuff in there, I like it! There's not much rhyme in there, but if it's got a meter it will probably work well. The only thing I would change is the word "emotion". It's just one of those sappy words that bug me.

I think I'll post a list.