Members daveski Posted March 29, 2006 Members Share Posted March 29, 2006 www.podsafeaudio.com artist name 'daveski' and 'hoserski' I have different songs under either band name. OR www.soundclick.com search 'daveski' If you like hard rocking blues check out... Working Blues or Sam's Blues or B Careful What U Wish 4 or Don't Ask the Question or Don't Give up the Day Job or Buzy or Can't Take you Anywheres More Traditional styles... Jealous Hearted Man or Letter or Devils in DC or Politician Blues or Judgement Day Blues or Preacher Blues or Baby Boomer Blues Lots more there...33 songs in all that I wrote. Enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members janusmanus Posted March 29, 2006 Members Share Posted March 29, 2006 I have to repeat that you should specify which songs to be selected for critique, otherwise you'll have some trouble in getting feedback, if thats what you want. ? can only repeat what ? said in your previous thread. posting three or four of them each time is better than posting nothing or everything. we mercurians need guidance to touch the ground. there is some problem with the links you have given.you must replace them with the direct links to your personal pages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members ToxicBass Posted March 30, 2006 Members Share Posted March 30, 2006 Daveski's linkskihttp://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=507618 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members daveski Posted March 30, 2006 Author Members Share Posted March 30, 2006 www.podsafeaudio.com/jamroom/daveski www.podsafeaudio.com/jamroom/hoserski Does that help? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members jerrye Posted March 30, 2006 Members Share Posted March 30, 2006 Hearing "Go down." Nice guitar playing. I had trouble hearing the lyrics. Maybe it's my system. If you raise the vocal level in the mix, similar to that of the solo guitar level, I think that would help. Jerry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Chicken Monkey Posted March 30, 2006 Members Share Posted March 30, 2006 I listened to "Devil's in DC". The rhythm and lead guitars were very similar tonally, and so they aren't very distinct from one another--they muddle together. Vocally, you're really more talking than singing. That is cool with the so-called "talking blues", but those don't generally have choruses, as yours does. I would rethink that part. Lyrically, you're a little explicit. There is not a lot of craft apparent in the lyric, aside from some rather forced rhymes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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