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Please critique/make suggestions - Time for me


jerrye

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Time for me

 

 

 

1. Afternoon , outdoor cafe

Your face said you had to go

You inhaled a sandwhich, checked the time

I ate dessert all alone

 

Never dreamed of this

You got too busy for me

 

Will you find some time for me?

Please step back and see

We once spent time together

Will you find some time for me?

 

2. I can wait for a little while

For the girl that I knew

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Now that's better. Give me a day or so to brood on it.

A couple of non related things:

You should always, for your own piece of mind, use the copyright symbol, year and your name under the title of the song. I try to when posting lyrics. I have no problem using my name; I just don't because nobody cares:cry:

 

Time For Me

© 2006 Jerry E

 

Afternoon, outdoor cafe...

 

Also your links don't work in your sig. I have to copy/paste mine in the body of every post. Can't get them to work in the sig line.

 

 

 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=481684

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