Members Christopher Kai Posted June 26, 2006 Members Share Posted June 26, 2006 Let me know what you think of my song! I'm ecording with session musicians in Nashville soon, so I need feedback. It's a Country Rock genre. She Was A Real Good2006 - Christopher KaiVERSE 1One look and I had to get herMore curves than a big league pitcherNo sir, they sure don't make 'em like that no more I got her with a lot of persistenceTook her out for our first big weekendDid things I ain't ever done before PRECHORUSI was just a youn buckShe was a real good... CHORUSYou don't forget your first timeI was her's and she was mineOnce you find that love you're stuckI know that love is blindBut I was seeing things just fineAnd what I saw was a stroke of luckShe was a real good...TruckVERSE 2I'd ride her off in the big fieldsMud flyin' off of her back wheelsWe sure got dirty but we sure had fun We'd end the day on her big bedStaring at the stars over our headTailgatin' just waitin' for another run PRECHORUSI was so love struckShe was a real good CHORUS BRIDGENow her shade of red is a shade of rustShe's a hundred thousand miles plusBut I ain't ever gonna' give her up CHORUSpresent tense... TAGShe is a real goodShe is a so goodShe is a damn good truck_______________ Thanks in advance! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members tommyboy301 Posted June 27, 2006 Members Share Posted June 27, 2006 looks interesting, kind of a catchy theme, played fast you might be able to pull it off. ps: finally just got me a "new" one in december, nothing like that "smell"....hmmgood luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Chicken Monkey Posted June 27, 2006 Members Share Posted June 27, 2006 The lyrics are strong, in that Nashville-song-machine way. The demo vocals are very wobbly, with some serious pitch/tone issues. I don't know what your goals are, but I could see this getting pitched to the Toby Keith type of singer. You'd need to hire a demo singer to get it across, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Christopher Kai Posted June 27, 2006 Author Members Share Posted June 27, 2006 Originally posted by Chicken Monkey The lyrics are strong, in that Nashville-song-machine way. The demo vocals are very wobbly, with some serious pitch/tone issues. I don't know what your goals are, but I could see this getting pitched to the Toby Keith type of singer. You'd need to hire a demo singer to get it across, though. Yeah, this is one take, just so you guys had something to listen to. I wanted to get feedback on the song before taking it to Nashville to have demo singers/musicians cut the thing for my publisher. I'm feeling good about y'alls reviews, though. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bluesway Posted June 27, 2006 Members Share Posted June 27, 2006 i couldn't hear it b/c it's myspace, but i like the quirky lyrics. good luck, man. (post somewhere else and i'd love to hear it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Christopher Kai Posted June 29, 2006 Author Members Share Posted June 29, 2006 My Soundclick Page She was a Real Good is on my Soundclick page, too. Does that help? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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