New song

So after working in a few cover projects for awhile I have returned to writing and working with an original project. The song is called Bad Temptation. as much as I try to leave 80's hard rockinfluences behind, they always creep in a little bit. so listen and let me know what you think. I havent been in this forum for a long time because I havent really been writing lately but I will review some songs soon.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=288330

Hey, listened to it and I like the production and the tune in general. I don't know why but I felt like the vocals were just slighty sharp during the chorus; not enough to be outright bad, just not sure if that's what you wanted. Feel free to keep everything as is there's not much for me to add in terms of criticism. Good job man

Typing as I listen....

Yes the vocals are a bit "off" on the chorus so a retrack would be cool if you're so inclined. That aside, this is a catchy rocking tune with some great guitar playing - especially the solo....

I think the songwriting is strong in this - well organized and keeps my interest throughout. Enjoyed this one!

thank you very much for the kind words guys, this is a song that I am very proud of so far.

do you feel that the vocals are pitchy during the chorus? I am not the singer so sometimes its hard for me to hear that stuff, I recorded all the bass and guitars and my co-writing partner sang it. the drums are pro drum works drum loops.

Dude I enjoyed this song. The singer has a good style for a tune like this, and the riffs are right where they need to be.

Dolan