Members Poor Yorick Posted March 9, 2007 Members Share Posted March 9, 2007 here's a rough mix of a song -- need to fuss with some verb and levels and track one little bit of feedback for the intro. give it a listen and let me know if you have any comments/suggestions. it's just kinda a dumb little rock song w/ overly smart lyrics. http://www.thirteenbirds.com/american_studies_rough_mix.mp3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Chicken Monkey Posted March 9, 2007 Members Share Posted March 9, 2007 Yeah, you need an intro. I love the tambourine, but I always love tambourine. You're doing a real vocal and guitar duet here--the note you sing in the melody is consistently the root note of the chord you're playing. That gets old fast. The guitar part is probably fine, I'd work on improving the melody. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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