Tounge Tied

Hello chaps and chappesses, thought I would put down some more lyrics for feed back. This ones a very slow and highly melodic song. Around 64bpm, verses are in Em, with the chorus being in G. The 'Here' bit is kind of a breakdown, consisting of the song modulating to Am, and 'here' being repeated and going up in Velocity and pitch. The final chorus is following the trend, in C.

Tounge Tied

Don't know what to do

Monday night

And Tuesday's nearly through

I'm in a white room

But the walls are blue

I'm gona stay here

For another day or two

Here, will be the death of me

Here, won't let me be

Here, will be the death of me

Here will take it's toll on me

Summertime has long since passed

Autumn leaves running through the grass

That day filling up my brain again

I'm okay but I won't lie down

Here, will be the death of me

Here, won't let me be

Here, will be the death of me

Here will take it's toll on me

Here

Here, will be the death of me

Here, won't let me be

Here, will be the death of me

Here will take it's toll on me