Members RadiationNation Posted April 27, 2009 Members Share Posted April 27, 2009 http://www.myspace.com/juteblue We just finished up our first demo for a song called "Vertigo Williams" (should play first on our myspace). It's a bit different, but opinions are welcome! Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members blue2blue Posted April 28, 2009 Members Share Posted April 28, 2009 Well... you know, since we focus on critiquing only works in progress here in the SW forum, you're likely to get critiques more pertinent to being in the process of writing the song. And it sounds like you guys are actually past that stage, so people may be disinclined to put the time and effort into thoughtfully listening to your song and giving you the kind of constructive criticism on songwriting that we focus on -- since the song is written and you're already promoting the demo. If you see what I mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members RadiationNation Posted April 28, 2009 Author Members Share Posted April 28, 2009 I know what you mean, but I don't think asking for feedback means that I'm always necessarily out to change the song itself. In this case, I'm more just looking for opinions on the song which might provide insight more on how I will write future songs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members rsadasiv Posted April 28, 2009 Members Share Posted April 28, 2009 I'll try and check it out tonight. Did you know smurfco was in a band called Vertigo Jones? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members rsadasiv Posted April 30, 2009 Members Share Posted April 30, 2009 Pretty cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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