Here (COMPLETE REDO)

This one is SO much better in my opinion.

Here I am

Here I stand again

Nothing better than sin

Maybe something, could, make it better but . . .

I know, this time I won't win

I've come so close, sometimes

Now I guess I'm left behind

Holding my heart, on own your own self-being

What else cannot go right

Maybe something, could, make it better but . . .

I know, this time I won't win

I'm wanting you more than I ever have

Here I am, not angry, not mad

Maybe something is better, for you, but not for me

I need you in my life

And I take away the pain

Through my protection

There's no one here to save

I'm the infection

You will be mine

Don't you forget it

When you're afraid

You'll just have to face it

And I am here

In your heart

Against your will

Nothing can save you

And I am here

Do you know where you are

Against your will

YOU ARE INJECTED

I AM YOUR DISEASE!!!

NOTHING LEFT TO PLEASE!!!

I am through with my momentum

I'll let you be free

I AM YOUR DISEASE!!!!!!!!!

I HAVE NO FEELINGS!!!!!!!!

I've used you up

Your time is up

And you are free

i have Waiting Room stuck in my head, which undoubtably colored my read of these.

good progression of the emotion from beginning to frustrated end.

"what else cannot go right" is a great turn of phrase, i can think of so many ways to spit that. you might consider repeating it.

thank you. After reading what people said before, I actually re-read the song. I wanted to add more because I just thought, "Man this is way TOO short!" Glad I changed it

It's difficult to appreciate without a link to the recording, do you have a scratch version on-line?