Members sorocknroll Posted November 18, 2009 Members Share Posted November 18, 2009 Quote the lines before you and add one. If you're going to add a line and there have been multiple suggestions for the next line, pick the best one and keep going. I'll get you started... "I remember how you held me when summer broke its fever" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members popthree Posted November 18, 2009 Members Share Posted November 18, 2009 i remember how it felt when you let go and made me fall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members easilyspooked Posted November 18, 2009 Members Share Posted November 18, 2009 "I remember how you held me when summer broke its feveri remember how it felt when you let go and made me fall"and the cardboard candy animals they were selling on the street there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Stackabones Posted November 18, 2009 Members Share Posted November 18, 2009 "I remember how you held me when summer broke its feveri remember how it felt when you let go and made me fall"and the cardboard candy animals they were selling on the street theremade me wonder why I ever loved you at all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Chicken Monkey Posted November 18, 2009 Members Share Posted November 18, 2009 "I remember how you held me when summer broke its feveri remember how it felt when you let go and made me fall"and the cardboard candy animals they were selling on the street theremade me wonder why I ever loved you at all It's chorus time now, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members djowens123 Posted November 18, 2009 Members Share Posted November 18, 2009 Chicken Monkey your right!!!Can i do a four line chorus or is that cheating????The summer time... produced a rhymethat we all once used to feelThe summer time... setup a linecan we make this song feel real.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Stackabones Posted November 19, 2009 Members Share Posted November 19, 2009 It's chorus time now, right? I thought this was going to be AABA. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Eclepto Funk Posted November 19, 2009 Members Share Posted November 19, 2009 time for a revision! "I remember how you held me when summer broke its feveri remember how it felt when you let go and made me fall"and the cardboard candy animals they were selling on the street theremade me wonder why I ever loved you at allyou held me when summer broke its feveryou let go and let me fallcardboard candy animals and shiversyour face haunting as a mirrorball Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members charv712 Posted November 19, 2009 Members Share Posted November 19, 2009 I say we do another verse before the chorus... "I remember how you held me when summer broke its feveri remember how it felt when you let go and made me fall"and the cardboard candy animals they were selling on the street theremade me wonder why I ever loved you at all... As summers close grew nearer, leaves began to line the streets... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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