Let's write a song!

Quote the lines before you and add one. If you're going to add a line and there have been multiple suggestions for the next line, pick the best one and keep going.

I'll get you started...

"I remember how you held me when summer broke its fever"

i remember how it felt when you let go and made me fall

"I remember how you held me when summer broke its fever

i remember how it felt when you let go and made me fall"

and the cardboard candy animals they were selling on the street there

"I remember how you held me when summer broke its fever

i remember how it felt when you let go and made me fall"

and the cardboard candy animals they were selling on the street there

made me wonder why I ever loved you at all

It's chorus time now, right?

Chicken Monkey your right!!!

Can i do a four line chorus or is that cheating????

The summer time... produced a rhyme

that we all once used to feel

The summer time... setup a line

can we make this song feel real....

I thought this was going to be AABA.

time for a revision!

"I remember how you held me when summer broke its fever

i remember how it felt when you let go and made me fall"

and the cardboard candy animals they were selling on the street there

made me wonder why I ever loved you at all

you held me when summer broke its fever

you let go and let me fall

cardboard candy animals and shivers

your face haunting as a mirrorball

I say we do another verse before the chorus...

"I remember how you held me when summer broke its fever

i remember how it felt when you let go and made me fall"

and the cardboard candy animals they were selling on the street there

made me wonder why I ever loved you at all...

As summers close grew nearer, leaves began to line the streets...