For you - a finished song....

Hello

Thankyou for the previous comments on the demo songs.... im going to finish them all and was going to leave this til last but i just had a few more words in my head and it came together quick.... its probably the least exciting of the three for me but worth finishing.

What say you?

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Lyrics.

I am but just a tatty record sleeve

My spine may be old but believe...

that every word i sing will ring true

after all i just wrote them for you.

to bring you luck and love in a song

turn me up you're no longer alone

I may not be clear but I'm pure as the sea

will this dust covered music

bring you much closer to me?

We will see

Just tell me how you feel

and i'll be set free

like a songbird that floats on the breeze

And i have my moments

you know that i do

And i have my secrets

But i'll always be true

and i will bring you shelter

when your hearts filled with rain

and when you're bored, angry or selfish

I will love you all the same

I will

For I am your song

and a song I am for you.

Wow, sounded like something from a movie soundtrack...a *good* movie too.

I'll keep this simple. I like it.

wow... very nice

Lovely. Excellent performance & recording too.

this song is pretty good i love the chill Venicey vibe man keep it up. nice voice

Gorgeous song. Really well written, mate!

.....or even one that gets placed as a film credit?

I like the production choices on this new one, particularly the authentic vinyl sounds. It's a nice song as well.

lenny i think this is SPAM only one post and some dodgey looking think to click

thanks for the comments, means a lot.

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I definitely think you're right. I had already reported the post. Blue will check it when he comes online and strip the link from that guy's post, if he confirms it's spam. Maybe you should edit the link out of your quote?

Even without the spam, you've gotten a lot of favourable comments on this. Looks like a winner.

I know.

Useful spam, though......this time.

This is absolutely beautiful: the song, the performance and the production.

Whatever the signal chain is you are using for your vocal is perfect.

I am really enjoying what I have heard of your music. Please keep it up.

Signal chain

rode ntk valve mic > Cheap yamaha mixing desk > old yamaha soundcard (that i love)

I do have pro tools with mbox but i cant use the preamp compared to my old yamaha soundcard its so flat.

And, once again, talent trumps gear.

You have a really great sound man. Very raw but beautiful. Great voice and guitar

Right... it's gone now. As mod, I clicked -- don't know if it was taking a long time to load a particular sanskrit font, or what, but it made me nervous enough that I nuked the post.

It totally smacked of a spammer. But I'm pretty sure Lenny figured the same. After a while you start developing this compulsion to mess w/ their minds but with few exceptions, they don't seem to return. A lot of them only post one spam per membership, just coming back to create a new membership the next day, no matter what. It's probably a human assisted robot. It's cheaper to hire someone who knows the English alphabet enough to deal with a CAPTCHA Turin test than it is to use a computer fast/powerful enough to make it practical. Plus, they seem to be aware that the Forces of Light (anti-spammers) use Google to look for cribbed/copied posts.

It's tit for tat in this battle to rid the internet of spamners...

I have no idea what you jsut said.

Come on, Lee! You're a smart guy.

You should know that they used that method to test the shroud for authenticity.

Mr Mod! will you get these spammers off my topic...they are taking over!!

haha

Very nice work man...it reminded me of Gram Nash....Songs for Beginners.

Elegant....

Sweet sincere song. I like the poppier, uptempo one better, but this one definitely has its virtues as well.