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Not Quite Now


grace_slick

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This didn't work out how I wanted...dammit. But I don't hate it. I'm gonna leave it alone for a while and do something else and come back and see how I feel. I'm having issues with the voice today...feel like I've got no air and the high range is restricted. So happy listening! lol

 

http://picosong.com/Xy2

 

Not Quite Now

 

Oh, I feel you stir beside me

Oh, I lie beside your naked body

But I don

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I really like this one. The forboding drum thudding away is a great touch, though I think it could change up a little when the 2nd verse comes in. Perhaps a more traditional perc sound (snare, hihat) with that heavy kick being tossed in, just no as frequently.

 

I actually like your relaxed vocal a lot.

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