Members Foose31 Posted January 10, 2014 Members Share Posted January 10, 2014 Thought of this while driving in to work this morning. Listened to Hank Williams, "Cold, Cold Heart" and that song helped with the idea. naturally it's pretty rough and far from complete but I'd thought I'd finally share a new idea with you all. Revised version: (thank you stickboy)Set your troubles freeV1.I try so hard to show you, you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members stickboymusic Posted January 10, 2014 Members Share Posted January 10, 2014 I like it. It seems to be a hard one to get to flow due to some line lengths , edit ideas attached. Of course if you have a melody that it fits to then ignore all this V1. I try so hard to show you, you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Foose31 Posted January 10, 2014 Author Members Share Posted January 10, 2014 Nice changes! ^^^^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Foose31 Posted January 10, 2014 Author Members Share Posted January 10, 2014 stickboymusic wrote: I like it. It seems to be a hard one to get to flow due to some line lengths , edit ideas attached. Of course if you have a melody that it fits to then ignore all this V1. I try so hard to show you, you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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