Your opinion

Hi Guys

I'm new here , and I want to introduce myself .

Main part of me is Music , I actually just launched my website a week ago.

I would like to know what you guys think about it and my music.

http://mrgreen.us

Thanks in advance:idea:

There's an awful lot of black on your website Mr.Green.

Welcome....

I'd like to check out your stuff but I have to ask Mr.Pink and Mr.Brown first....

Hi Mr Green, Nice to have you here.

A few suggestions on your site.

First, you should (or have someone) proofread the text. There are some punctuation and grammatical errors.

Second, you need to do a bit more than add all those meta terms to get spiders to find your site and index it for the search engines. There are numerous places where you can find info on how to do that. The problem is that with Flash text, the spider cannot reconcile your meta words with the text contained in your site, so it thinks that you just put a bunch of meta words in so it would show up in every search.

But a very nice first site!

Site looks nice, runs well, gd stuff there.

The silly built in jukebox (who the hell actually likes these?) just cut in over the top of my tunes which really, really f**ks me off plz set it to default 'off' (I might be the only person but I hate pages doing stuff for me if I want to listen I bloody well will).

Guitaring wise, the phrasing is a little lacking at times, though the clips aren't very long (I got bored by the end of the first clip, but that may be the end of the tune or something)

Mr. Green, you really need to work a bit on your phrasing. You repeat the same small section of a pentatonic scale way too often to keep my interest. I heard 1-3-5-3-1-3-5-3-5-3-5-3-1 several times in the section I listened to. A little more melodic thought (instead of noodling) might improve this quickly.

Also, your left-hand tremolo needs to loosen up a bit but also steady out... it's inconsistent.

Best of luck.

- Jeff

I`m on a mac so...

The jukebox kept playing and I couldn`t shut it off. Kind of annoying because I was trying to watch some live video.

Need more pix. Site was slow to upload and yes there was a lot of black but thats just a color thing there. Not bad.

Much Success,

Ernest

Welcome.

Usually people who spam their music or website on their first post take a beating from the forum regulars, but maybe you've caught everyone on an off day.

Your site seemed fine to me. The effects on the images were cool.

In the gallery, I prefer slide shows, rather than having each image open up in a new window.

I agree with the above poster who said they prefer to click on your music, than to have it just start up.

As for the music itself, sorry, it did nothing for me. I've heard so many guitar heros over the years, that guitar solos have almost completely lost their meaning for me.

Once again, welcome to the SSS on HC.

I decided to rip on his guitar playing rather than his purpose of posting it. I've turned over a new leaf; I am now the Nice Weasel.

- Jeff

I like the site. It's groovy.

The music was a bit innocuous though. All embellishment, no beef, damnit.

-Peace, Love, and Brittanylips

Okay ,.. I checked it out...

Usually the term SP.. appears all over threads like this ,... I heared nobody say that ,..cool

I like the site. period.

The music however,... it's not my thing and I've heared too much like it. Sorry...Too much like 13 in a dozen. But hey if someone loves that stuff it's good to present it the way it was presented on your site Mr.Green

Geessh! I was wondering what he did to provoke such harsh treatment . I hope you didn't scare him away .

It seems that we're allowing people to post their music here now, which I think is a very positive development. The last 10 or so people who posted their music here in new threads have not been told to "go post there music somewhere else." That's great - lots of people here are superb sources of constructive criticism.

This is a site for musicians - it should not be forbidden to post your music here for all to hear. I'm very happy we now have a new attitude toward this matter. :thu:

Thanks ,

Working on that .

Where do I find info about it ?

And thanks again

Thanks

You have an option to turn it off ( speaker symbol )besides the jukebox:)

The music isn't my thing, so I won't comment. The scrolling on the site worked real slowly, painfully so, I'm not sure why. A lot of the graphics are first rate; the Bio isn't much of a Bio; you should probably add that to the influences page. Nice concept overall.

Oops, I forgot to click and hold to scroll, which worked fine, but I prefer to scroll a page at a time, or a line at a time.