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Jugulator

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I'd appreciate if you read and discuss the following lyrics for a new song... Are there any errors? Does it sound good enough? Thanks a lot.

 

(You're) Not alone

 

Don’t try to think that you’re the one,

‘Cause in the whole world you’re not alone,

Not alone…

The world is hard to change its way,

There ain’t no choice, we gotta stay.

 

And if you want to cross the line,

Don’t do it fool, stop wasting your time.

Look ahead –

The Earth is splendid and ever not the same.

You’re living here sure not in vain.

You’re living here sure not in vain.

 

Solo

 

The world is hard to change its way,

There ain’t no choice, we gotta stay.

There ain’t no choice, we gotta stay.

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