Members Jugulator Posted July 8, 2011 Members Share Posted July 8, 2011 Howdy! I'd appreciate if you read and discuss the following lyrics for a new song... Are there any errors? Does it sound good enough? Thanks a lot. (You're) Not alone Don’t try to think that you’re the one,‘Cause in the whole world you’re not alone,Not alone…The world is hard to change its way,There ain’t no choice, we gotta stay. And if you want to cross the line,Don’t do it fool, stop wasting your time.Look ahead –The Earth is splendid and ever not the same.You’re living here sure not in vain.You’re living here sure not in vain. Solo The world is hard to change its way,There ain’t no choice, we gotta stay.There ain’t no choice, we gotta stay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members staticsound Posted July 8, 2011 Members Share Posted July 8, 2011 You'd prob get a better response if you posted this in the songwriting forum.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members urca Posted July 8, 2011 Members Share Posted July 8, 2011 The world is hard to change its way,There ain’t no choice, we gotta stay.There ain’t no choice, we gotta stay. Double negative. Wrong. Next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Jugulator Posted July 8, 2011 Author Members Share Posted July 8, 2011 Thank you very much. I will type "there is no choice". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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