Members renips Posted September 11, 2010 Members Share Posted September 11, 2010 Please check out my new song called Friendly Voice. http://www.reverbnation.com/tunepak/2749547 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members DukeOfBoom Posted September 11, 2010 Members Share Posted September 11, 2010 i think it needs at least a 2 bar intro rather than the sudden start but its done well enough even though it's a pretty mundane chord progression and strumming pattern. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members JohnBenussi Posted September 11, 2010 Members Share Posted September 11, 2010 I dig the songs feel. I particularly like the chorus.I'm feeling the song but there is a crash cymbal that seems out of place,the dynamics of your voice need more variety, and I agree with Duke in that youneed more chord variations instead the same one repeating. I think the reverb is too saturated.Id keep the background vocals saturated for the ambience it gives. Hope to hear more.You don't have pitch issues. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members harrysmith Posted September 17, 2010 Members Share Posted September 17, 2010 Ya i hear it and its good enough keep singing for us thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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