Is there something I'm doing wrong here (audio included)

Hi,

here is my singing "Always on the run" by Lenny Kravits.

http://www.box.net/shared/ipi1dsi70n

I think this is big step forward in my singing, because month ago I couldn't sing this song at all this high, as I was pushing my chest voice for years, and didn't have any head/mix voice. Now I think this is more the mix then chest (Am I right?) because I feel my voice resonating in the mask area of my head.

But this is still not very smooth, and it's not so easy for me to sing it. I add some raspiness to voice, cause it's the only way that I can hit this high notes, it's usually unintentional raspiness, not something I aim for but it's there anyway when I sing high, I can't hit those notes with clear voice.

So does anyone has some input on me singing, and can tell me if he/she can hear something I do wrong here?

Thanks,

Nikola

Sounds like you need a little work on the schnerp and the ascending legatos, but otherwise keep on with how you're going.