I sang "In my defence" F.Mercury, please rate it =)

vocals are not engaged

 

using a computer microphone costs $ 2

 

DivShare File - inmydefenceFinal2.mp3

The recording is fine - $2 mic tells us what we need to hear. You have a tendency to miss the low notes, and you sing a little flat in many places. You can sing this song better I can tell by the quality of the parts you get correct. What are you using for recording and headphones?

ido1957 thx! I use for record the program Cubase 5.1 Portable (size-149Mb) and cheap Chinese closed headphones EvroMedia WB-HP750 and a microphone on them.

vocals are not engaged using a computer microphone costs $ 2 http://www.divshare.com/download/11631729-314

 

 

Even though you're using a $2 mic, I can still hear everything

in the recording...

 

I'm diggin the tone of your voice. Sounds smooth:thu:

However your vibrato is very inconsistent, and your pitch is sporadic.

 

Try to work on those things.

Johnny_B thx!

 

People and what about the tone of my vocal? pleasant, unpleasant? :poke:

 

and what my pronunciation of English?, awful or normal?

Wow you sound a lot like Freddie.

 

Nice tone, pronunciation is ok but a few words aren't perfect, but not too far. Mainly words like "with" and "dream".

 

The only real problem is that you keep going out of tune. I would suggest that you just focus on that and you should be great. The best thing I can suggest is to do gentle vocal exercises.

 

fa fa fa FA fa fa fa

 

etc.

If you aren't sure how to do these voice lessons, hopefully you can find some on the internet. Try to do them every day for about 20 minutes or so.