hakase

bjorked- i'm someone that likes unconventional sounds - i actually like that the piano shifts to the right during the song, and that the acoustic guitar sounds unusually loud. it really depends on what you aim for though. as it is, it's a great indie/ alternative song (if it must be categorized) - if you wanted a "commercial/ polished sounding" track it would be different, but i have a feeling that it's not the direction you want to go anyway. it sounds exciting and interesting to me as it is. apologies for having only vague suggestions but i'd personally try to find a way to EQ and make the guitar sound a bit *thinner* (it's cool to have a big presence in the mix, but it does sound a bit too boomy, sometime to the point it's too much on my ears through my headphones. also, many big sounds seem concentrated on the left channel, so i might want to shift the pan a tiny bit). i wouldn't do anything on the piano, it's also dynamic and it might be a bit problematic, it'd leave it as it is. the vocal sounds nice. i'd experiment with EQing on the guitar and percussions, to gel with the piano and the voice present. i like the way each instrument is recorded. really intimate.

[edit] thought i'd get the copyright thing first..