Members MrClumzy Posted October 23, 2020 Members Share Posted October 23, 2020 Hello!! I would definitely love to hear your feedback! https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/LtzE Thank you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators davie Posted October 29, 2020 Moderators Share Posted October 29, 2020 Interesting vocal, pleasant tone. The glissando into the notes can be an interesting style, but can become overdone and get tiring to listen to. I would recommend working to hit the notes more without sliding onto pitch. Aim directly at the intended pitch. See how that works out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Ike Laumbrok Posted August 12, 2023 Members Share Posted August 12, 2023 Your words melody and phrasing support the solid but simple chord progression you've chosen.To me it feels like your song could benefit from adding a hook or chorus that has a different but complementary feel. Maybe a slightly different rhythm or use of phrasing along with a change in melody that surprises the listener. You've got a solid foundation to work from. Keep up the good work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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