Members LCK Posted January 6, 2018 Members Share Posted January 6, 2018 A few lines from a song in the works. The lonely hoursgo slowly by,you think about herand wonder whya love intendedto last for yearssuddenly endedin tears. Your phone is useless.It never rings.You long to ask hera thousand things.But you discoverwith each new dawnyour precious loverhas gone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Delmont Posted January 13, 2018 Members Share Posted January 13, 2018 I like it. Throw in a Beatlesesque chorus and you're there! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Subreel Posted January 28, 2018 Members Share Posted January 28, 2018 Pretty cool, lyrics are quite 'direct' - is that what you were going for? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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