Members tony333 Posted September 27, 2017 Members Share Posted September 27, 2017 Just words at this point. No chorus or direction for chorus. I usually write hearing a melody but this time it hasn't come yet. Maybe its just a poem? Anyway- My skeletons cant be justifiedNo dignity nor shameIf they had the chance to speakThey'd whisper just the same Courage twisted up real tightPushed down deep insideLives beside two mortal sinsJealousy and pride I stand here just spinning Staring up at the sky Time keeps unwinding I'm asking reasons why There is no reason why There is no reason why My demons can't be pacifiedWith wickedness or tearsI try to run and hide awayThey always smell the fear Staring down the rabbit holeTrying not to leapEvery time I close my eyesPray my soul to keep I stand here just spinning Staring up at the sky Time keeps unwinding I'm asking reasons why There is no reason why There is no reason why The ghosts have now all vaporizedLost to wind and timeAll the rest were passers byFaces undefined Reflections of old memoriesStories of old warsScars that pass as better timesTruths that beg for more I stand here just spinning Staring up at the sky Time keeps unwinding I'm asking reasons why There is no reason why There is no reason why Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LCK Posted October 6, 2017 Members Share Posted October 6, 2017 Some very good images! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members tony333 Posted March 4, 2018 Author Members Share Posted March 4, 2018 So I have been sitting on this for awhile. Still no real melody yet. But yesterday a chorus that I really like camefrom that magical place I can't explain. So here is what came up- I stand here just spinningStaring up at the skyTime keeps unwindingI'm asking reasons whyThere is no reason whyThere is no reason why Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Juelti Posted November 19, 2018 Members Share Posted November 19, 2018 I liked that song. Nice I`ll use link on this text here. I think u deserved it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Delmont Posted November 22, 2018 Members Share Posted November 22, 2018 Looks like you already have your chorus. Nice work. Carry on! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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