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I Can't Jump (March 2017 song)

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My newest completion is "I Can't Jump". I used one of the episodes from the tv show "Cheers", as the blue print for this one. It has nothing to do with a problem of mine.

First there's the shock

Than There's pain

Than there's the ping pong blame

I shared my side

She said I'm right

Still I sleep alone at night

And Every night is long without her

And the reasons that she gone is just a blur

 

Chorus

 

I'm so bloody sad

But I can't jump

I've lost all I had

But I can't jump

Every thing gone wrong, yeah it's all bad

I'm so bloody sad

But I can't jump

 

I lost my joy

Lost my sun

I lost her way of fun

She filled my need

She made my day

She left me wishing shed stay

And every day is dull without her

And the reasons that she gone is just a blur

 

Repeat chorus

 

My whole world's been so much duller

Since she's been gone my life been smaller

I've been such a mess, but I can't jump

 

Album

Just A Fan - https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/just-a-fan/id1145579818

 

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I like the lyrics, thanks for posting! I love that phrase "ping-pong blame". I think the song would be stronger if the second verse moved the story along somehow, though, instead of repeating the same information with different words. Maybe something more about how she left, or what's keeping you from jumping.

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