I'll Be Doing All Right

[SilverBeat]

[h=2]It's me doing every thing start to finish, but looking for thoughts on lyrics and mix

 

[/h] [h=2][/h] [h=2]I may not Know

Every thing that I should

But I'm getting by just fine

I may not have done

Every thing that I could

But the stars and sun still shine

So if you come around

Don't bring me down

I don't want to hear your bla bla bla

 

Chorus

 

I'll be doing all right

Without your excitation's

I'll be doing just fine

Without your solititations of right

 

I may be slow

Every now and again

I'll keep working on my fast

I can loss my cool

Every time I'm a pain

But I'm sure that it won't last

So if you come around

Don't bring me down

I don't want to hear your bla bla bla

 

Repeat chorus

 

The sun gonna shine

Rains gonna fall

I'll be doing just fine

Through it all [/h]

[DeepEnd]

First welcome to the HC Forums. Enjoyed your song. I'm impressed that you did all of it. 'Way more instruments than I play. The Beatles/British Invasion influence is clear. I noted that the lyrics you posted didn't track what you were singing in a couple of places. You might want to edit your post. I'm mainly a lyricist, although I write my own songs, but I really don't dig the "bla bla bla" at the end of each verse. There must be a better way to word it, maybe:

"I don't want to hear it can't be done" or

"You can run along and have your fun" for the first verse and

"I don't want to hear that I'm a fool" for the second, which rhymes with the end of the fourth line in each respective verse. Just a suggestion. Thanks for posting.