Members tony333 Posted July 18, 2016 Members Share Posted July 18, 2016 Just lyrics and a melody so far. Havent recorded it yet. Fall From Grace I will die a poor manAnd I may die aloneBut I will die a happy manFor true love I have known But now she lives in memoriesIn the creases of my mindThe biggest lie they tell youIs that all is healed with time So I search in this bottleFor all those day dream truthsAnd realize that her loveIs no longer mine to loose Cause now she loves anotherI can hear the cold wind blowMy demons threw it all away1000 years ago I will die a poor manAnd I may die aloneBut I will die a happy manFor true love I have known But now she lives in memoriesIn the creases of my mindThe biggest lie they tell youIs that all is healed with time Every time I close my eyesI can see her faceAn angel bringing mercyFor a soul that fell from grace Now all it is forgivenWith nothing but a prayerBut the scar is unrelentingOf the love that we once shared I will die a poor manAnd I may die aloneBut I will die a happy manFor true love I have known But now she lives in memoriesIn the creases of my mindThe biggest lie they tell youIs that all is healed with time break Every time I close my eyesI can see her faceAn angel bringing mercyFor a soul that fell from grace I will die a poor manAnd I may die aloneBut I will die a happy manFor true love I have known Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Delmont Posted July 20, 2016 Members Share Posted July 20, 2016 Very Nashville Skyline. You're off to a good start! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LCK Posted July 20, 2016 Members Share Posted July 20, 2016 So I search in this bottle For all those day dream truths And realize that her love Is no longer mine to loose. I like the lyric overall, but I think this ^ verse misses the mark. The bottle line is a bit of a cliche. And "day dream truths" feels like you're trying too hard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members tony333 Posted July 20, 2016 Author Members Share Posted July 20, 2016 It was suppose to read Trying to find these day dream truths I will see about the bottls line. It does come off as cliche. Thanks. I like the lyric overall, but I think this ^ verse misses the mark. The bottle line is a bit of a cliche. And "day dream truths" feels like you're trying too hard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Tullsterx Posted July 21, 2016 Members Share Posted July 21, 2016 I can feel the emotion when I read this. Seems pretty personal. Whether it is or not, both this and Halfway Home seem like very personal sentiments, and that's a great thing. Not, trying to line-step or anything, but I get the sense that songwriting is very cathartic for you? Anyway, I'm enjoying reading and hearing your stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LCK Posted July 21, 2016 Members Share Posted July 21, 2016 "Trying to find these day dream truths" is better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members tony333 Posted July 24, 2016 Author Members Share Posted July 24, 2016 Okay. Opinion- 1. Trying to find these day dream truths 2. Trying to fight these day dream truths 3. Trying to find some day dream truth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LCK Posted July 26, 2016 Members Share Posted July 26, 2016 Okay. Opinion- 1. Trying to find these day dream truths 2. Trying to fight these day dream truths 3. Trying to find some day dream truth 1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members tony333 Posted July 26, 2016 Author Members Share Posted July 26, 2016 Sorry I missed something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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