Members bee3 Posted March 27, 2015 Members Share Posted March 27, 2015 Had an idea this morning when I walked outside and there were worms all over my driveway... preparing to die. Just a verse and chorus for now... http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13085659 Why? The sun when it shines brightThe worms on the pavement take their last chance on lifeBefore they melt into the groundWe turn a blind eyeIt's nice to be human where the pleasant things in lifedon't kill us... send us underground So why are we killing each otherWhy can't we love one another Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LCK Posted March 27, 2015 Members Share Posted March 27, 2015 Had an idea this morning when I walked outside and there were worms all over my driveway... preparing to die. Just a verse and chorus for now... http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13085659 Why? The sun when it shines bright The worms on the pavement take their last chance on life Before they melt into the ground We turn a blind eye It's nice to be human where the pleasant things in life don't kill us... send us underground So why are we killing each other Why can't we love one another Lovely. Very nice. I'm not sure "melt" is the right word for what happens to worms. They kind of dry up in the sunlight, don't they? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bee3 Posted March 27, 2015 Author Members Share Posted March 27, 2015 Yeah... they kind if stick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members rhino55 Posted March 27, 2015 Members Share Posted March 27, 2015 Cool. Food for thought; plenty of pleasant things in life kill humans, just maybe not as quick. Not sure where you want to take this, but as an idea for the second verse... We killed each other in the chorus. Then we get put in the ground. I guess the worms need to eat too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bee3 Posted March 27, 2015 Author Members Share Posted March 27, 2015 Yes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted March 27, 2015 Moderators Share Posted March 27, 2015 Cool. Food for thought; plenty of pleasant things in life kill humans, just maybe not as quick. Not sure where you want to take this, but as an idea for the second verse... We killed each other in the chorus. Then we get put in the ground. I guess the worms need to eat too. That man's a thinker! nice tune justin! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members mbfrancis Posted March 28, 2015 Members Share Posted March 28, 2015 Really like this, would totally develop it. Esp first few lines. Agree they don't melt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Delmont Posted March 28, 2015 Members Share Posted March 28, 2015 And don't forget why they're called "the conqueror worm"! The Conqueror Worm Delhttp://www.thefullertons.net( •)—::: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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