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My first symphonic piece


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Hey all,

 

I just completed my first symphonic piece and am much too close to it to hear it as a listener. Its real short.

 

I used a guitar synth for the fast parts of it and it came out pretty clean which was fairly surprising. Give er a listen and let me know what you think. Man some of the software out there is getting pretty powerful. Kind of scary really.

 

The vast majority of you folks' opinions I have a good deal of respect for.

 

Cheers!

 

(its the first link on my myspace page)

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t completed my first symphonic piece and am much too close to it to hear it as a listener. Its real short.

 

 

I like it. I need to hear it on better speakers than my laptop - but for a first listen - overall I like it. The string stabs seemed a bit hot about half-way through but that may just have been the cheap speakers I heard it through.

 

Nicely done!

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Awesome Jeremy!

 

I'd agree with both previous posters.

 

Too short. I want to hear more.

 

And at about 0:44, if I were mixing it I'd bring the string hits down, and the melodic line of triplets up.

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That's a really good piece of work Jeremy! :thu:...a bit short as others have said, though too short is always better than too long...for most things that is...:o....but I really liked the melody and arrangement. Very dramatic and cinematic sounding..cool.

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Thanks guys!

 

Yeah I know its pretty short it's gonna be a work in progress. Where it ends will lead up to a different part at some point. But spare time being what it is these days I wanted to wrap it up and allow it to stand for now. Until I can get back to it.

 

I agree with the string hits coming down a bit and will likely make that adjustment when I get back into it.

 

Having a place like this for feedback is awesome.

 

Cheers!

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