Members danuniversal Posted December 8, 2009 Members Posted December 8, 2009 http://www.reverbnation.com/tunepak/2096105 "Suave luna azul" (Soft blue moon) It is a song composed improvising, I make it in about 5 hours... The mainproblem is that I did not have a microphone, so I had to use a cassete recorder connected to the computer. And welll, I was following the rule of improvise, so I did not plan th structure of the song, so the lyrics are a little bit closed between... Plase tell me what do you think about it. It was made improvising almost everything. The slide guitar is a real improvisation, having just a main idea for a lead... Please tell me what do you think about it and how can i improve to compose better songs. The song is in spanish.
Members jeremy_green Posted December 8, 2009 Members Posted December 8, 2009 Bro - that tune tripped me right out. It has a very kitschy kind of cool messed up vibe. The spanish makes it even more so for me. If it is supposed to be trippy then you succeeded. However If you are trying to write serious melodies then you need some work. Not meaning to rip on you or it at all. It's pretty harmonically rough. There are an awful lot of bad notes and pitches in there. It's quite hard to comment without knowing your intention. Bravo for doing it!Bravo! Bravo! for being brave enough to post it for feedback.
Members Virgman Posted December 8, 2009 Members Posted December 8, 2009 Jeremy, you missed your calling. I think you could have been a diplomat.
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