Members Maggot Posted April 4, 2004 Members Share Posted April 4, 2004 Here's our band'snew demo. I'd love some feed back on some of the songs - especially the ones that I wrote.: The Second Wife and Marianne. www.soundclick.com/lastnerves Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members hardrocksinger Posted April 4, 2004 Members Share Posted April 4, 2004 I get dork rock, I listened to half of second wife, and finished marrianne I understand man!!! but, like, make fun of yourself, or something everyone hates. like presidents, flying planes, your smelly socks, what you found in your couch today... making fun of girls gets harsh responses from crowds in my book. have a little compassion for the opposite sex, and your songs will go much farther. make the joke songs more about how great the girls are, and how you think they can ever put up with guys. IMO; hope this helps a little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Maggot Posted April 4, 2004 Author Members Share Posted April 4, 2004 Translation (I think I tied one on last night): I though I was making fun of religious fanatics and people who are mean to the second wife. In Marianne, I dodn't hink I was making fun of anybody-just telling a cornball ghost story. I guess I need to sharpen my message when I write. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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