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Hi-

 

I have been working on a song for awhile and want some honest feedback. Please check out my site and let me know what you think of the song, lyrics and vocals. I would be so appreciative and would be happy to do the same for anyone else. Thanks

 

Song name is "I Lose"

website: www.myspace.com/monhe

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The melody's pretty good, but the word "ugly" came out a bit harsh with the hard "g" sound on such a critical part of the melody.

The drums come out like a left hook, which I like, but then they leave again. I wanna' rock out... what was your thinking there?

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