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Collaboration on original song with BMI songwriter


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What do you actually want to hear from us?

I think the song is ok, but the melody is not very catchy. The guitar sounds great though. It is what stands back after the song has finished. It's the thing you remember.

Maybe you should record the guitar only and then try to come up with another melody while listening to the guitar. It must be possible to write something more catchy.

Good luck with the song!

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What do you actually want to hear from us?

I think the song is ok, but the melody is not very catchy. The guitar sounds great though. It is what stands back after the song has finished. It's the thing you remember.

Maybe you should record the guitar only and then try to come up with another melody while listening to the guitar. It must be possible to write something more catchy.

Good luck with the song!

 

 

Thanks so much! That's excatly why I posted this to get valuable feedabck like this. Really appreciate it.

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