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banjobach

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Lately I've just been writing bummed out songs

I think after this one, I've said all I wanted to say about a certain

trouble in my life. Hopefully I'll start writing more upbeat stuff.

This one just seemed catchy to me so I wrote it out and have a rough recording for it.

Morning Routine

 

And the lyrics

 

Wake up, lead

fills my head

I'm so heavy

in my bed

Morning sunshine

I've been sleeping

for some time

 

Do you wonder how I've been

Do you wonder how I've been

 

Put my feet

on the floor

The chills set in

And I ignore

Cream and coffee

One more cup and I'm at ease

 

Do you wonder how I've been

Do you wonder how I've been

 

Think of all the

words I've said

Some were true

and some are dead

"Don't be sorry"

I can hear you say to me

 

Do you wonder how I've been

Do you wonder how I've been

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I think if you want to fake being upbeat rename the song "Morning Sunshine" :p

 

Seriously, I think it's just a catchier title.

 

I like the tune right now, very mellow. I don't know what else to say about it honestly, I can't find any major flaws, and I can't hear your guitar parts quite well enough to talk about them aside from that they seem to support just fine. Go record this at higher quality, it's worth the time!

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thanks for the comments

I dunno about morning sunshine, because I say that about 5 seconds into. It just might come off as corny having it come up so soon. I'm glad you liked it. I'm thinking when i go back and record it I might throw some soft banjo or ukulele in the mix. Should be nice and mellow.

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