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It's got a big, glossy, classic rock sound. I'll skip critiquing the lyrics because when I do, I like to be able to read the lyrics to make sure I understand them. It's not really a musical style I'm currently engaged with but it sounds fine in context, very assured, professional rock.

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Hey guys! Have a new tune that I could use some critiques on. I will warn you in advance, there is a slight timing hiccup in a section.

 

0:15

2:10

:eek:

 

I love the guitar sound and the vocals. Big 80's reverb - diggin it. That part at 2:10 is kind of off, but there were a number of other places where I was thinking "this song would really kill if the drums were better". I want that big 80's gated reverb drum sound, with some kind of John Bonham/Jimmy Chamberlain imitator banging the crap out of his kit, locking in to the guitar riff (like at 2:26, he should just be slamming that staggered backbeat) and filling like a madman.

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