Members Johnny-Boy Posted March 7, 2008 Members Share Posted March 7, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members myredshoes Posted March 7, 2008 Members Share Posted March 7, 2008 Well, of course I like it very much. It seems like a sort of universal work. Or else we were just seeing the same woman. If you see her, say hello. Very well written in any case... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Johnny-Boy Posted March 8, 2008 Author Members Share Posted March 8, 2008 Well, of course I like it very much. It seems like a sort of universal work. Or else we were just seeing the same woman. If you see her, say hello. Very well written in any case... Thanks Myredshoes! Yeah, universal lyrics sounds good. Since Cal wrote the lyrics, I'll have to check with him to see if you're seeing the same woman. Best, John:cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members myredshoes Posted March 8, 2008 Members Share Posted March 8, 2008 Well, any of them, really, I guess. Was thinking of this lyric last night and this other woman years ago who said "You know, after you apologize so many times, it really doesn't mean anything anymore." I'm sort of high-maintenance in the forgiveness department... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members myredshoes Posted March 8, 2008 Members Share Posted March 8, 2008 Nice picture by the way. The sky colors grab me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members kennychaffin Posted March 8, 2008 Members Share Posted March 8, 2008 Very Nice John. KAC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Johnny-Boy Posted March 8, 2008 Author Members Share Posted March 8, 2008 Thanks Kenny! Yeah Myredshoes, apologizing only go so far Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members ido1957 Posted March 9, 2008 Members Share Posted March 9, 2008 I like it - some serious craftmanship here. Two big thumbs up ! Recording is excellent also. Good stuff... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Johnny-Boy Posted March 9, 2008 Author Members Share Posted March 9, 2008 I like it - some serious craftmanship here. Two big thumbs up ! Recording is excellent also. Good stuff... Thanks Ido1957. BTW, that is Paul Bathan doing the singing. Best, John:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members DeveryHarper Posted March 11, 2008 Members Share Posted March 11, 2008 Hey Johnny, I really like the piano on this one, however, as an honest opinion (you are looking for those, no?) I have to say I am not fond of the singing melody at all. It just goes along in the same key, no more, no less. The piano is optimal though (sound and writing)! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Johnny-Boy Posted March 11, 2008 Author Members Share Posted March 11, 2008 Hey Johnny,I really like the piano on this one, however, as an honest opinion (you are looking for those, no?) I have to say I am not fond of the singing melody at all. It just goes along in the same key, no more, no less. The piano is optimal though (sound and writing)! Funny you mentioned the melody. I composed a different melody (at least 50% different). Paul ad-lib'd the melody when singing it. I thought it worked though. Don't know if I still have the original melody. If I do I'll post it. It would be interesting to me to hear the original again. Paul's melody is probably more singable though. Best, John:cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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