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Could use some feedback! Acoustic singer/songwriter


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Hey all!!! New to the board but expect to spend a lot of time here! :)

 

I have some originals up and would love some feedback on everything from the songwriting to guitar and singin.

 

www.myspace.com/maxlsongs is the MySpace

 

and here's a video from a recent live performance:

 

http://myspacetv.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=34073192

 

Enjoy (hopefully)!!!

 

Thanks!!!

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Hi,

 

I've just listened to "Came Undone" on your myspace.

 

I really enjoyed it, and i think you have a great voice.

 

The only thing I would say is that possibly record a second guitar part or some other kind of instrument to boost certain parts of the song, and help the song progress.

 

Thats my opinion but i was struggling for something, and im no expert just a beginner songwriter myself.

 

http://www.myspace.com/thevelocities

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Hey all!!! New to the board but expect to spend a lot of time here!
:)

I have some originals up and would love some feedback on everything from the songwriting to guitar and singin.


www.myspace.com/maxlsongs
is the MySpace


and here's a video from a recent live performance:


http://myspacetv.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=34073192


Enjoy (hopefully)!!!


Thanks!!!

 

You can start by giving feedback to others. That will make them more inclined to comment on your stuff. :thu:

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