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Beat up on the playground by ...... (


Sometimes we paint ourselves into a rhyme corner with no way out...sometimes better to change the rhyme scheme...try Chuck or Gusz

 

 

Actually that doesn't have to rhyme with anything. I was just rhyming the second line of each... part... whatever ya call it. I was thinking

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what about Iraq ? Afganistan might even work



Beat up on the playground by ...... (

Beat up on the playground by Roy Baphoon

 

Hey, thanks for the response. :)

 

Actually I want to be real vague about the war thing so any age could relate,

 

maybe the whole line needs replace with something that reflects the military experience.

 

Roy Bafoon... is that a common synonym name for a bully-type? If so, that might work, or another similar.

 

How about otherwise... do the lyrics kinda work?

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Actually I want to be real vague about the war thing so any age could relate,

maybe the whole line needs replace with something that reflects the military experience.

 

My first thought here was "infantry"

but if I understand correctly, you want something the listener will know you're talking about war but something that's not directly related ?

 

Roy Bafoon... is that a common synonym name for a bully-type? If so, that might work, or another similar.

 

We as kids used the name Bubba Baphoon for someone that thought they were tough but were actually a couple of apples short of a basket

I didn't feel this would fit the song so came up with Roy

 

How about otherwise... do the lyrics kinda work?

 

I thought so, you painted a pretty clear picture for me anyway

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