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New song - It's the thought that counts


rockinrobby

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I wrote this one some time ago, but it's never been recorded. As promised, this is an unplugged version.

 

I did it last night and tonight for just a bit. It's another mellow acoustic tune. I hope you like it, please let me know what you think? Thank you very much for listening and if possible commenting.

 

 

It's the thought that counts;

 

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The intro sounds very familiar, but I like it a lot. It's a lot easier to critique the lyrics when I can read them, even though I can understand most of it well.

 

It's cohesive and has a very strong vocal melody that works perfectly with the chord structure. Excellent falsetto, very well done. Lyrically, it feels more like a generalized commentary until the end of the refrain, where it gets personal- that was a bit unexpected. It finishes in this vein, but I stumbled on this.

 

Other than that, all I can say is your voice is pissing me off- you're making the rest of us sound terrible.

 

Great song Robby.

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