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fenderbender66

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It's good. Simple lyrics like this depend heavily on the music. Straight up rock n roll? I could hear a Tom Petty style with this real easily.


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Thanks!

Most of the lyrics I write tend towards simple, but I try to have hidden or double meanings as best I can.

Do you know what it is I'm talking about in this song?

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Well, there were a couple of lines that tipped it. I wasn't exactly sure if you were talking alcohol or pills. You gotta remember the people reading here are not exactly your average listener. I spent years in college analyzing poetry and literature, so my brain automatically starts looking for that stuff. I don't think you want to hide it too deep or it's lost. I think you handled it pretty well. It reads like a love song at first glance, but there are enough allusions to make you think.

 

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