Members floyd1991 Posted February 8, 2009 Members Share Posted February 8, 2009 A weird little poem/possible song lyrics that I wrote a few days ago. I was going for Jim Morrison's style of singing in "The End" a little bit. It's mainly about how none of us are truly ourselves, and have to change our behavior to be acceptable in our societies as we grow older. Let me know what you think. Deeper lies the quiet eyes. Always watching, always seeing. Always dreaming, but always being. Waiting for what, there never lies. Longing to be, being to belong Dreams of freedom, while holding the key So easy to see what you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Elias Graves Posted February 9, 2009 Members Share Posted February 9, 2009 Deeper lies our lonely eyes That's a really good line. EG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members ido1957 Posted February 10, 2009 Members Share Posted February 10, 2009 I like it - you're definitely channelling that Jim Morrison vibe. Keep it going and it will be a good one.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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