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Welcome to the Songwriting Forum.

 

The basic mission of the forum is the discussion of the art and craft of songwriting and offering assistance with feedback and constructive criticism on new songs and other works in progress. Of course, giving thoughtful comment requires some time and energy.

 

Like so much in life -- what you get out of it will likely depend on what you put in...

 

I hope you'll share your insight with others when they're looking for critiques -- it's a great way to let people get to know you. And the more that people know you as someone who is willing to help out, the more eager they'll be to help you when you're looking for some good ol' constructive crit.

 

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Your song sounds very sleek, the backtracks have momentum but not much development or evolution. There are some rhythmic provocations I notced in sections... not necessarily glitches but they did draw attention. The vocals are appropriately soulful. I make it a point to not comment on lyrics unless they're posted, as it's too easy to get them wrong, so I'll hold off there.

 

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