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well, since no one else is chiming in, i'll give it a shot..

 

 

drums need something happening in the beginning, besides just the basic groove....

sounds like you took a stock loop, and just ran with it..

 

i'd suggest, if you're going to play straight eighth note chugging riffs, at least write a drum track that is going to pick up the slack, IF you want to avoid cliche-ville.

i mean, really mix the drums up, spend some REAL time writing a drum track, otherwise, it's just going to sound like you're playing to a loop.

which is boring.

 

the guitar tones are nice...

and i like the harmony stuff, and the melody stuff....

i like the clean break down, the groove change there is welcome....

 

it's just a really stiff groove, typical of an older style, and as you said, cliched.

been done a million times....

 

you've done it well, as far as the arrangement and the idea of it...

 

 

 

if you dont' want to re-work the rhythm tracks to spice up the groove, consider building up a lyric to this, and make the lyric and singing be the focus...

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