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a bombastic calamity

ever spiraling in a

state of empty vanity.


Long days, short nights

with too many fights

brings about loss, fear

and life with no light.


Through darkness you

swim alone, as you

run from your soul

yet search for a home.


Oh insanity

why take your time

when you know where not fine.

Just to wait and watch,

Just to wait and watch...




That's what I've got so far. This is my first real poem/song I've sat down and seriously wrote and would like to get some opinions/critiques on it.

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