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Welcome to the crash


TravvyBear

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Wrote this one last night, and recorded it early this morning, recording is fairly rough, but it gives a good idea of the song. There are a few plosives, and 1 lyrical messup.

 

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Welcome to the Crash:

 

YOu look like sin

that boy said with a grin

You touched his smile

we knew he roped you in

It hurt my bones

When you said that were just friends

I drank your wine

Welcome to the crash

 

Girl we should tuck in, its a sin to be the same, I'm a sin and I'm ashamed.

We'll smother all your makeup, it's a shame to be so cute, so I'll sit that girl a flame

 

I'm feelin rough

Now that I have caught your bluff

We won't make out

I'm living in a drought

It hurt my bones,

when you said that were just friends

I'll break your spine

Welcome to the crash

 

chorus

 

 

 

ooooh oooooh

 

Let's get drunk

We'll start that spark of love

and I'll {censored} up

But we'll pour another cup

and we'll lay down

find a soft spot on the ground

but I'll wake up

Welcome to the crash

 

Chorus

 

Welcome to the crash now

It's a {censored}ty place to be, It was made for you and me x2

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This sounds way too familiar.

You are drinking too many people's wine, and you are only 17

You have an obsession with breaking spines

Everybody and everything is a sin in your songs

 

And I could swear you recycled that entire chorus- not just the lyrics, but even the melody.

 

I'm not sure how to frame this...but....are you ripping yourself off?

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This sounds way too familiar.


You are drinking too many people's wine, and you are only 17

You have an obsession with breaking spines

Everybody and everything is a sin in your songs


And I could swear you recycled that entire chorus- not just the lyrics, but even the melody.


I'm not sure how to frame this...but....
are you ripping yourself off?

 

 

Yikes, I guess some of those lyrics are similar. I didn't really take a notice.

And yes, this is the same chorus from a song of mine a while back, I hated that song, but I did kinda like the chorus, so I took the chorus from that song, and stuck it into this one. Needless to say, that old song is dead.

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Yikes, I guess some of those lyrics are similar. I didn't really take a notice.

And yes, this is the same chorus from a song of mine a while back, I hated that song, but I did kinda like the chorus, so I took the chorus from that song, and stuck it into this one. Needless to say, that old song is dead.

 

 

Oh...it's alright then. People use similar or the same words all the time in songs...everyone does it. The song was pretty good. The main reason I got thrown off was because of the chorus because it was a replica of one of your older songs.

 

It's a catchy tune. I think I kind of understand what you are saying here...even with the spine breaking :cop: I may not understand 100% of it, but I get at least some parts of it. So, lyrically it's not too bad at all.

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Oh...it's alright then. People use similar or the same words all the time in songs...everyone does it. The song was pretty good. The main reason I got thrown off was because of the chorus because it was a replica of one of your older songs.


It's a catchy tune. I think I kind of understand what you are saying here...
even with the spine breaking
:cop:
I may not understand 100% of it, but I get at least some parts of it. So, lyrically it's not too bad at all.

 

Thanks man. I appreciate it.

Heh, I don't even think I get 100% of what my songs mean sometimes.

 

:wave:

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