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ALyricman

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See my face white as snow

In the twilight of the gods

And all around is the dimly glow

 

I wanna outstay in Midgard

I'm guilty why I must go

In the underwood or Asgard

 

(Chorus)

I only wanna kiss the sky

But first I must learn to fly

 

See my eyes dry as nutshell

How looking in the mirror

Through which I will presently fell

 

No, I can't decide what I hear

Is it the sound of thunder or a hymn?

Is it my voice or the noise of a bear

 

(Chorus)

But I only wanna kiss the sky

But first I must learn to fly

My desire will take my life now

It's too late to stop it anyhow

 

And I could not deny it

Therefore every fear will disappear

But I could not deny it

Now silence is melody for my ear

But I still can not deny it

I can not lead myself from here

I still can not deny it

Therefore I'm principal in every wit

 

(Chorus)

But I only wanna kiss the sky

But first I must learn to fly

My desire will take my life now

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it's a nicely visual set of lyrics, paints a picture.

the ABACAC rhyme scheme in the first pair of triplets makes me uncomfortable.

a "thunder hymn" is a cool concept. though you wrote thunder or, and set it up to contrast with your voice and a bear, and that confuses me a bit, as i read it: Thunder Is To Hymn As Your Voice Is To A Bear's Voice?

also, rhyming Hear with Bear?

but, again, cool visuals!

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