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A list of things to do before you die.


stickboymusic

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A friend asked me to write a list.... obviously i had to set it to music

 

I'm kinda pleased with it.... no bridge, no chorus...middle 8 ...nothing

 

just a list of things to do.... some a little silly, some damn right true

 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=977998&songID=8441858

 

 

opinions appreciated

 

x

 

p.s have a go at one yourself...its amazingly good fun and seems to just pour out when stuck for a little inspiration

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What great idea and I really dig your approach. Love it! Ebullient and effective and quite enjoyable. I think repeating the final couplet would be a nice touch, but it works just fine as it is. Solid melody and idea can go a long way without any fancypants songform. :thu:

 

Hmmm ... may have to give something like this a whirl.

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How great is that!!!?

 

I want to swim to the bottom of the bottomless creek...

 

I loved every word. Your delivery kills. Nice shout out to dead idols that rock and a nice Elliot Smith nod who... though you sound nothing like him, it comes as no surprise that you listened to him. I loved it. Clever idea that doesn't drown in cleverness.

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